From my previous post not much has changed. I received nearly all good feedback and the only negative feedback was that a business like this already exists. I did some research and saw that they have no presence in Gainesville.
Not bad of an idea I do agree with the feedback from before. There are other apps out there that do this such as postmates then you have uber eats and amazon pantry. Taking a closer look to see who your competitors no matter the business venture is vital for your company to succeed. A suggest when you film is to have better lighting, this will boost your production value and keep viewers tuned in. Also I would leave out the review/feed in your video and only use the video for the elevator pitch. Other than that keep up the good work, feel free to leave a comment on my post.
Hello Will. I think you did a great job in with your pitch. It was very precise and to the point. With your idea, I also have to say that this service has already been made. Another person in this class had the same idea and its already a big service in Austin, TX. You should try and find a way to differentiate your service from everyone else’s.
Check out my blog post: http://jent3003.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
I think your business idea is pretty good. It's tough especially in areas like this to drive to the grocery store. You seem passionate about your topic and straight to the point. I like that! Being someone who loves to eat healthy, I don't necessarily have the luxury of buying things in bulk. This means I have to shop frequently.
Hope all goes well.
Check out my blog at alexanderdavidknight.blogspot.com
Will,
ReplyDeleteNot bad of an idea I do agree with the feedback from before. There are other apps out there that do this such as postmates then you have uber eats and amazon pantry. Taking a closer look to see who your competitors no matter the business venture is vital for your company to succeed. A suggest when you film is to have better lighting, this will boost your production value and keep viewers tuned in. Also I would leave out the review/feed in your video and only use the video for the elevator pitch. Other than that keep up the good work, feel free to leave a comment on my post.
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Hello Will. I think you did a great job in with your pitch. It was very precise and to the point. With your idea, I also have to say that this service has already been made. Another person in this class had the same idea and its already a big service in Austin, TX. You should try and find a way to differentiate your service from everyone else’s.
ReplyDeleteCheck out my blog post:
http://jent3003.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
Hello William Mercer,
ReplyDeleteI think your business idea is pretty good. It's tough especially in areas like this to drive to the grocery store. You seem passionate about your topic and straight to the point. I like that! Being someone who loves to eat healthy, I don't necessarily have the luxury of buying things in bulk. This means I have to shop frequently.
Hope all goes well.
Check out my blog at alexanderdavidknight.blogspot.com